Aderta's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Armor Study]

The armor structure is done quite well, but armor gains a lot of its definition from shading and texture (as well as color, depending on your choice of medium).

You've definitely got shading and use of light down quite well, the only thing I would've done differently is possibly add some age to the more exposed areas (cracks. scrapes, gouges) and made use of negative shading on the indents in the armor. (Specific example being the dark line on the elbow guard).

However, despite creative differences in style and experience, I applaud your artwork. Very well done.

[Zombie Girl]

Well...

I say the more holes the merrier.

The detail is terrific, and loved her shredded attire. Only thing that I see, or Don't see, is more ribcage action. The dress fits loosely even though she's supposed to have decayed slightly, or have torn flesh, yet I don't see the wind clinging to her rips, leaving an imprint in the tank top.

5/5 10/10. Beautifully stunning craftsman ship, milady.

[:EPIC:]

:O

Thats quite epic. I love the use of multiple colors in the backgrounf to make him pop out, and the shading was done very nicely. His hands are a little, awkward, but his FACE... I Love his face, it's just... I'm not quite sure but i cant stop staring at ti O.O...

Overall:
5/5 10/10

P.s. I was your first vote and Reveiw =3 I feel special...

faceofdoomness responds:

Yeah I still need to work on them hands. I find it slightly displeasing that after all these years of drawing I still can't draw human figures and hands very well. Guess I need to do more observational work stuff.

Anyways, I am proud of you for being the first voter as well as the first reviewer. If I could I'd give you some kind of certificate or medal to ya but an over the internet high-five/ hug will have to do for now. Thanks for your contribution and support. :)

[Inferius]

Not bad.

Nice drawing! Really captured undead features, lol. Everything was very good in detail, and only a few minor problems i saw, well only 2 really. One was with the elbows, they're a little bit off from the way they really look, and the second is with the Forsaken Symbol, The mask is supposed to have a little more forehead.

BUT other than that, the drawing was superb.

Also, if you dont mind me asking, what server do you play on? :D

Trennto responds:

Thank you for the nice comment :) And thanks for pointing out the mistakes.

It's "Flame Keeper Inferius" now and I just hit 80. I play on Antonidas but you'll usually see me on my shaman alt Nemus >.>

WoW foreva xO

[Larry the viking]

Not bad, but...

The only 3 problems here, it looks like his hand is upside down, he has no chin, and his horns look a little misplaced. Other than that its a nice drawing :)

Good work,

4/5 8/10